Writing Better Bullet Points

  • Be Clear and Concise: Bullet points should communicate your message succinctly. Use short, to-the-point sentences that capture the main idea.
  • Start with Strong Action Verbs: Begin each bullet point with a strong action verb to create a sense of action and accomplishment.
  • Prioritize Information: Place the most important information at the beginning of the bullet point to ensure it grabs the reader’s attention.
  • Give Specific Details and Examples: Incorporate concrete examples, statistics, or specific achievements for credibility.
  • Maintain Parallel Structure: Keep the structure of your bullet points consistent. Use the same grammatical form for each point to enhance readability.
  • Use Numerics for Impact: Incorporate numbers to quantify achievements and make your bullet points more impactful.
  • Check the Tense: For current roles, write bullet points in simple present tense. For example instead of “Managed” say “Manage”. Do not say “Managing”.

Formula

Strong Action Word (Verb/Skill) + What did you do or achieve? + What was the result or purpose? Can you quantify it? + How did you do it? What were you tasks or duties? What tools did you use?


A diagram illustrating the formula for writing strong bullet points

  1. Instead of: Worked on projects and tasks as part of a team.
    Use: Collaborated with cross-functional teams to execute projects, resulting in a 15% reduction in project timelines.
  2. Instead of: Responsible for sales in my region.
    Use: Achieved a 20% increase in sales revenue within assigned region by implementing targeted marketing strategies.
  3. Instead of: Managed employees and handled customer issues.
    Use: Supervised a team of 10 employees, providing leadership and training, while successfully resolving customer concerns, resulting in a 95% satisfaction rate.
  4. Instead of: Assisted in software development projects.
    Use: Contributed to the development of a real-time inventory tracking system using Python, resulting in a 20% reduction in processing time.
  5. Instead of: Handled IT support tasks.
    Use: Provided technical support to a user base of 200+ employees, resolving hardware and software issues promptly, and achieving a 95% customer satisfaction rating.

By Shobhit Patel
Shobhit Patel